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Post by danitiwa on Oct 9, 2015 21:31:56 GMT 1
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Post by Karl on Oct 10, 2015 13:23:39 GMT 1
Cool stuff Dani! They have a very nice mood to them and nice linework too! Here are a few things I think you could think about when it comes to composition: Really like this one. I think you could think a bit more about how the lines lead you around the image. I think varying the direction of the leading lines a bit more could help making it more dynamic. Maybe breaking up the light and shadow a bit as well.  This one is also really nice but has a bit of the same problem. The lines kinda keeps leading the eye out from the canvas. It's not too bad but I think it could be done in a bit of a smoother way to give the eye an easier time moving around the image.  In this one I think there's a big area of the drawing that is a bit lacking of interest (for the eye). There's not much that leads the eye there. Maybe having a bit more of value contrast in that area would do the trick.  Hope this can be of help for your future projects! I'm a big fan of your drawings!  |
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Post by danitiwa on Oct 10, 2015 21:41:54 GMT 1
:'0 senpai has noticed me Actually though thank you for the compliment, I think my whole next week is made. And I will pay more attention to how the eye moves, thank you for pointing that out. I want to work on making my stuff a little less flat, really force myself to think more in terms of masses, lighting and volume. Finally fixed my tablet AND started oil painting, so I'm going to hopefully be less of a line jockey. Here's a super quick thing I did for the spitpaint "Lost Children", (Also slightly static compared to the direction Karl was talking about) ![]()  Man I should paint something jolly some time :'D |
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Post by diegojimenez on Oct 15, 2015 20:03:57 GMT 1
Very inspiring (kudos Dani!). And educational (thanks Karl!). Eye candy before bedtime.
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