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Post by William on Oct 10, 2015 0:28:01 GMT 1
Aright, this is my sketchbook. I'll just dump some things here! You are more thank super welcome to shred everything into pieces if that's what you want. We're all trying to get better! Trying something completely different here in terms of work flow and brushes. Feels so good staring at something else for a change... Damn bargues.  Skeleguy I haven't quite finished yet!  Draw or die guys! My images seem to be very small but enlargeable by clicking, is there a way to make them big like Dani's or Karl's? :< |
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Post by Karl on Oct 10, 2015 12:37:29 GMT 1
Cool stuff man! You got some juicy brushwork going on in these. I especially like the first one. I think the composition works fairly well in both images. But like I said before, you seem to go with a very centered composition a lot. While centered compositions can work very well I think it is easier to make a picture more dynamic by having the focal point more somewhere along the rule of thirds or just slightly off center.  Did a quick paint-over just to show what could happen by moving the main subject over and up to the left a little. I think it allows for a bit more asymmetry to make the picture more dynamic. Just don't mind my shitty design choices..  Or look at a similar composition like the one by waterhouse below and note how it's not quite centered.  Anyway, awesome stuff! Looking forward too see them finished! Oh and by the way, if you want bigger images I think you have to link them from other websites. |
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Post by William on Oct 10, 2015 14:11:40 GMT 1
Thanks Karl! Yeah I agree, as much as I think that pretty centered images work, there's always a way to push them to make them more interesting! Thanks a lot for the paintover, just what I needed!  |
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Post by danitiwa on Oct 10, 2015 15:34:46 GMT 1
What Karl said. Less centered compositions, playing with space never hurts.
Comparing this to your slightly older work on fb, William; I think you've made really huge leaps in the last few months.
Really siik stuff m8
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